Lord Anzius

Laviant Hallon: Laviant Hallon sat on his horse, before him were two men who had just a day before mugged and raped a fair woman. These two men sat there ...

*well.... The saviours are launching an attack against the dark knights. That is the main thing. the little details you can ask from the other.s* **BRAIN FREEZE**

INK HEART::::::::::::: YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE SERIES!!! (WITH the eragon series, septimu heap series, zamonia series and the bartimaus and harry potter.) I can't remeber what happ

A world of no lies...... Terrible. The truths of life: 1. Birth 2. Death 3. living, 4, feeling, 5, truth, 6. lies. these are the six things you can trust ...

truly.... :D

Jared McRemedy: The Dux of Ilian looked very old for his age as scars went through his face and because of the slight roundness of his belly area. He now ...

Maradomin: He looked at the horsemen... He had not expected this. The shadow clan was not trained for open combat. There were only a few that were good at it. ...

acctually I do have dark hair but I also have brown eyes..... and I'm 186 cm Blonde hair, green eyes, medium height

OK.. in this crit I will give you the truth and nothing but the truth: first the compliments: Great idea. A lot of text is always good. Good description. Good ...

dark hair, blue eyes, height somewhere about: 165-179 cm, quite slim....???

OK I'll do an other character... if its okay? Name- Jared McRemedy Gender- male Age- 35 Class- (Knight, Archer, Mage...): The Dux of Ilian Appearance- Round but not too round.. ...

I wrote this in ten minutes: Just like you it was, not intended, I am sorry, but you been bended. your will is no longer What it used to be, ...

This is the first part of chapter 6 I'll post the last part soon. Please critt THE UNDERWORLD We were in a small hall. It looked like one of the ...

Fat Carl Monday: Chris stood behind them. Carl turned around sulckily "Well, Chris mi' lad. How are ye'? Well me and I, were getting a little bit thirsty and mi' ...

Disturbing.. good but it gives me the creeps. UGH. SUICIDE.... that seemes like a quite used topic now. I have seen about five of them within one month..... Good anywayz. ...